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Keep an Extended Metaphor Coherent - Practice 2

An extended metaphor develops a comparison across several related details.

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An extended metaphor develops a comparison across several related details. For this exercise the chosen comparison is supplied; select a continuation within its imagery. Deliberate mixed metaphors can be artistic, but they are not the target of this particular brief.

Worked example

For a project compared to a voyage, charting a course extends the image. A sudden unrelated kitchen image would change the metaphor system.

An extended metaphor treats a project as a voyage using connected images: charting a course, meeting rough water and finding a new harbor. The project is not literally a boat trip.
An extended metaphor treats a project as a voyage using connected images: charting a course, meeting rough water and finding a new harbor. The project is not literally a boat trip.
Question 1 Brief 6 compares the work to a path. Which phrase extends that image system?
Question 2 Brief 7 compares the work to a puzzle. Which phrase extends that image system?
Question 3 Brief 8 compares the work to a bridge. Which phrase extends that image system?
Question 4 Brief 9 compares the work to a lamp. Which phrase extends that image system?
Question 5 Brief 10 compares the work to a conversation. Which phrase extends that image system?

Make It Your Own

Optional theme: a place that changes overnight. Develop one metaphor through three connected details. Then deliberately break it in a second version and explain whether that change helps your intended effect. You may draw, write or tell your idea. Use invented characters and places; no personal information or upload is needed. This activity is not scored.

Reflect on your choices

  • Trace the shared image system rather than merely repeating one word.
  • Explain one intentional choice and one possible alternative.
  • There is no required style or single correct creative response.